1. The protagonist wakes up confused with blury eyes
2. He gets up out of bed to see his clothes from the previous night are on the floor
3. He finds a tissue paper with a girls number on it on his dresser
4. He then gets dressed and leaves his home
5. He walks to the train station and gets onto a train
6. He arrives in West End (Oxford Street)
This is where our story didn't make any sense. Questions were raised such as "Why is he going West End for no reason?"
So...we had to scrap that opening to the video and create a more logical opening - back to the drawing board.
So...we had to scrap that opening to the video and create a more logical opening - back to the drawing board.
The ending of the music video wasn't changed by this opening, but the middle part had to be changed as we planned to have a club scene to showe where he got this number from but we were advised by our teachers Rob and Rosie that it isn't a great idea.
Instead, we decided that intead of him have the number we will have he recieving a text message from a person (being the girl) telling him to meet her in westend. This will work better as the viewers will be told what is going on.
So what happens next is:
1. The protagonist recieves the text
2. He goes onto the train and reaches westend
3. He then gets a flash back of the girl
4. He walks around looking for the girl he met before but can't find her
5. He gives up and goes home when he gets another flashback of how they met
6. Just about to get home, the guy gets a phone call from the number that texted him
7. Surprisingly the girl is standing to the left of him.
So what happens next is:
1. The protagonist recieves the text
2. He goes onto the train and reaches westend
3. He then gets a flash back of the girl
4. He walks around looking for the girl he met before but can't find her
5. He gives up and goes home when he gets another flashback of how they met
6. Just about to get home, the guy gets a phone call from the number that texted him
7. Surprisingly the girl is standing to the left of him.
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